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TITLE: Victory Is Hollow
AUTHOR: Nikki Harrington
FANDOM: M*A*S*H
PAIRING: Benjamin Franklin 'Hawkeye' Pierce/BJ Hunnicutt
SUMMARY: Hawkeye finally gets what he wants, but he knows there'll be no happy ever after.
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 200
CHALLENGE: 202 - 'First'
DISCLAIMER: I don't own these characters, nor am I making any money from them. I merely borrow them from time to time.



Hawkeye gazed at the man who now slept in his arms.

The man he'd exhausted through loving.

The man he'd wanted from the moment he'd first seen him.

The man who had become his closest friend, someone to drink with, laugh with, talk to, save lives with, his partner in crime, and just occasionally his conscience.

The man he soon grew to love, not just want.

If he was honest he had never thought the day would come when BJ Hunnicutt would succumb to him, but that night he had.

However, even as he smiled at the memory of BJ's mouth on his, the way it parted for him, the way it invited him inside, recalled his hands on his body, could still hear the way he called out his name as completion overtook him, the pain started to seep into him.

There could be no 'happy ever after'. At least not for them.

One day the war would end and they would leave this Godforsaken hell.

They would leave.

He would go back to Crabapple Cove and his dad.

And BJ? BJ would go back to Peg and Erin.

Yes, he'd won - but in truth his victory was hollow.

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sweptawaybayou
Mar. 24th, 2009 12:41 pm (UTC)
Lovely, lovely and so wonderfully painful.

Thanks for sharing!
nakeisha
Mar. 24th, 2009 12:45 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much indeed.
ashley_pitt
Mar. 24th, 2009 03:24 pm (UTC)
Ouch....poor Hawkeye

Poor BJ, he loves them all.
nakeisha
Mar. 24th, 2009 04:21 pm (UTC)
I know :-(

He does - but . . .

Thank you for reading.
darkhavens
Mar. 24th, 2009 05:57 pm (UTC)
Heartbreakingly lovely. :D
nakeisha
Mar. 24th, 2009 06:14 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much.
shinodabear
Mar. 24th, 2009 10:22 pm (UTC)
*sniffles* That was lovely.
nakeisha
Mar. 25th, 2009 10:29 am (UTC)
Thank you very much.
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nakeisha
Mar. 26th, 2009 03:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much indeed.
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